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 !!! abstract
 
-    Searching is an unknown adventure, where we may need to traverse every corner of a mysterious space, or perhaps quickly pinpoint our target.
+    Searching is an adventure into the unknown; where we may need to traverse every corner of a mysterious space, or perhaps we’ll quickly pinpoint our target.
     
-    In this journey of discovery, each exploration may yield an unexpected answer.
+    On this journey of discovery, each exploration may return an unexpected answer.